Wow in a bad way

#1

The pronouns are being switched constantly… It’s hard to tell who is talking. I’d like to see where this book is going, but at chapter 5 it’s becoming tiring…

#2

Made it all the way to 50. I gave it my best, replacing names and pronouns as needed. Then I hit 51 (first pay chapter) and I give up. I’m not gonna unlock something that takes mental gymnastics for me to understand because it’s just translated in a horribly messy way. I still wish it had an editor so I could see what happens next. I love these sorts of novels (female ml, space, sassy), but I’m going to have to pass on this one.