Story line is ok but the pronouns are bad. He, she, his, hers are all mixed up. I cant tell if xiaomeow is girl or boy cos writer used he then he got 2 ponytails…confusing
Story line is ok but the pronouns are bad. He, she, his, hers are all mixed up. I cant tell if xiaomeow is girl or boy cos writer used he then he got 2 ponytails…confusing