Too many errors

#1

I think the errors in this novel should be corrected. They’re just too much and occurred frequently that I get lost at times and I’ve to scroll to the top before I understand.

I would really appreciate it if the errors are corrected ASAP without delay. This is a novel and should be error free. There are places you’re to use ‘He’ and ‘she’ or ‘They’ would be used. There are places another person names will be introduced instead of using the leads’ names. It confuses one bikp

#2

I m here for bricks…