This story is good, but the writing is not so good. Keeps getting characters names mixed up, or repetitive sentences/words. Have to tried to figure out who is we who that's speaking or talking

**yinmorris99** · April 23, 2020, 7:49am

This story is good, but the writing is not so good. Keeps getting characters names mixed up, or repetitive sentences/words. Have to tried to figure out who is we who that’s speaking or talking.

**marcella_achkar** · April 23, 2020, 8:24am

I agree with you. It’s annoying

**nadhymdb061293** · April 23, 2020, 8:32am

Good story thanks for the chapter

**mala.kthr** · April 23, 2020, 8:49am

I agree with you he and she gets mixed up too much

**yinmorris99** · April 23, 2020, 11:24am

Yes, he/she getting mixed up a lot, or even the names of the characters, but the story is amazing so far otherwise and I love the main characters love/and devotion to his wife, and that masculinity protectiveness!

**quengaarlice** · April 23, 2020, 3:05pm

True on everything you said!
It’s a good and interesting story that keeps everyone in suspense because of the next locked chapters and we have to wait so long to read the rest.