There is no flow

#1

There is no flow. For example the first few chapters, the main female character woke up then there was an accusation suddenly there are gangsters at her door steps suddenly she meets main male character then she becomes homeless and broken engagement. All in two days. There are some novel that some chapters are too long in explaining a moment but this novel is missing a lot.

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#2

:pray: thank you so much for giving an actual review​:smiling_face_with_three_hearts: