The subject matter and the writing of this book are very good. But I have a point of view, since we are in the ancient times, there is no need to mention that much of the modern era, this is one point, the second point is that the women who are the main characters say too many praises, fighting scenes are too rare, and they are finished without writing a few words, there are so many treasures on them that they are useless and not a waste of things, I feel that it doesn’t matter if there are more wrong words, the most important point is, why are each sect standing there? Just for the main character? He entered the sect too easily and didn’t make any contributions to the sect. Every day, he had to pay for his own matters by giving the protagonist benefits. He should write about how in real life, every benefit to every relationship had to be fought for.
