Tenses, Spelling, Adjectives ( Grammar)

#1

The story is quite captivating. The main characters are interesting. However, some parts are confusing due to some grammar mistakes. Overall, it makes my heart laugh and skip a beat.

#2

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#3

Nice novel :+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1::+1:

#4

I agree… it catches me sometimes and I would read the line over again lol

#5

Overall I agree​:hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs::hugs:

#6

me too… then i’ll read the line again to see if correct. the him or her or his are also confusing… but it’s okay, i still love this novel.

#7

Yes grammar issue is confusing when we read

#8

That’s true, there are a lot of grammatical errors especially when it comes to differentiating between he/her… at times they refer to little Ranran as a he