Story is interesting but needs lot of improvement

#1

A good content of story could only justify if it is written carefully. Punctuation mark, slices of sentences and paragraphs plays vital role to achieve the face of the situation.

#2

Yes very true indeed. Interesting story

#3

Children are very smart

#4

Have you read message

#5

Good morning I amfdf

#6

And it was too Coudb

#7

Have I do the contents