Rush Ending

#1

It started with good description of all ch aracter, not so much despicable relatives, 300 details chapters and in 301 an very summary that will happen in the years to come.

Very confusing on 301 as this is the ending, no further explanation and you will the name for the first time… hmmm and is his fiance a prince? And no further details from them.

I paid 3dollors for this, i know help the author but hopefully nexttime make it very flawless ending. Not so much gaps.

#2

Good, interesting, heartfelt

#3

Очень интересная задумка. Хорошие интересные сюжетные линии, но много неоконченных ходов. Хотелось развития этих ситуаций. Окончание выглядит как краткое перечисление событий жизни сроком в 50 лет и всё это в одной главе