Review on the story so far

#1

I have enjoyed the story line. There are alot of grammatical errors, wrong use of him, her, etc. Also use of different names gets confusing.
Story shows how your child own family can be your enemies. Jealousy and greed are rife in today’s times. Kindness and care are becoming rare to find in many people.
Think it would be appreciated if more chapters are released in a shorter time period as the story is addictive and you just want to read more and more. Thank you