Review for novel

#1

Please work on the translation and gender definition…she for girl and he for boy.

#2

I swear…
The English here is really confusing…
You have to start thinking who they’re referring to

#3

Choden the same way as to the memory card reader to be appeared to the memory card reader to be appeared to the memory card reader

#4

Im done with the free chapters… So sad…the grammar should be check too…