Please someone do the proofread

#1

Please do the proofread, especially for the Japanese name.

It should be Inoue Orihime, rather than Jingshan Ziji.
Inoue Sora rather than Jingshan Hao.
Ill give another name later coz I just read this novel.

Please do the proofread, because i think that names is a crucial matter to a fanfiction novels.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASSE PLEASSEEE

#2

It should be Ichigo rather than Yihu.

#3

It should be Orihime rather than Weaver or Weaving Ji or Weaving Girl or Wise girl.

#4

It should be Ichigo Kurosaki rather than Heiqi Yihu.

#5

It should be Isshin Kurosaki rather than Hei Qiyixin.

#6

Orihime power should be Shun Shun Rikka rather than Dun Shunliuhua.

#7

It should be Hollow rather than Void.

#8

It should be Soul Society rather than Necromancy.
Seireitei rather than Yalexin,
and Hueco Mundo rather than Emptiness realm

#9

Sorry, the novel is translated from Chinese. Heiqi is the Chinese way of ichigo, and the other names are the same. Thank you for your advice, we will try to improve.

#10

Yeah, I know, but at least I will help the others with my notes, so that its readable to the other that don’t know.
In LNMTL, they has a Glossary section to translate the untranslatable term ex. names. I hope this novel can do that, coz I love fanfiction.

#11

It should be Tatsuki Arisawa rather than Ze Longgui, Tatsuki rather than Long Gui
Aizen rather than Lanran
Ichimaru Gin rather than shi wanyin
Hinamori Momo rather than Jensen, Jiasen, Jusen
Kisuke Urahara rather than Pu Yuanxizhu