Please do the proofread, especially for the Japanese name.
It should be Inoue Orihime, rather than Jingshan Ziji.
Inoue Sora rather than Jingshan Hao.
Ill give another name later coz I just read this novel.
Please do the proofread, because i think that names is a crucial matter to a fanfiction novels.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASSE PLEASSEEE