Needs an editor

#1

I’m on chapter eight and It’s not a bad story so far but there’s a problem with the consistency of the terminology used. There are a lot instances where a level of the same cultivation level being referred to as “Nascent”, “Houtian,” “Innate Realm” and that can be confusing because it makes it harder to remember the cultivation levels. The smaller issue is the misuse of gender pronouns which isn’t really a problem unless you run into people with ambiguous names. Anyway, if you can get past the cultivation levels you might be able to enjoy this.