My criticism

#1

The novel is something reasonable all the time, the problem it has is that the author does not know how to create the personality of the characters, to do that, he must have talked to hundreds of different people, or at least have read different novels of everything the world that are written by great authors, I say those novels like those that give in the university or those that are a whole novel like saying the book of harry pother, or the old ones like tom sawyer or those of the disney princesses but the real where the beast kills the beauty or where the sleeping beauty wakes up from the dream giving birth to babies, those that are somewhat dark or the insane ones that are made for those who have Schizophrenia, these Chinese novels made just like that have this problem