Loved the story

**adsaw78** · April 19, 2020, 10:12am

Nice story but English translation is confusing…

**gazelpaguibitan08** · April 19, 2020, 10:52am

Me too, i really like the story but the gender identification is a bit confusing

**s.lakshmi070** · April 19, 2020, 11:51am

I have been reading for sometime and find that really the grammar needs to work on. Lots of gender mistakes… Makes me read twice to understand

**rowena_cam** · April 19, 2020, 12:17pm

confusing yet cant stop reading☺

**dh_bh** · April 19, 2020, 12:19pm

Same boat. Many times time is wasted just understanding what the writer has ment. And whom is the writer referring to. Nouns and adjectives… with his and her. She with He.