Interesting start but a bit bland

#1

I will continue reading for now but I’m a bit disappointed. Great premise but it didn’t delivered it yet. I hate forced coincidences and even before it happened I wrote several chapters prior that the (mortal) childhood friend after being taken someone else take under his wing and she has “talented physique”. Turns out I was right. What are the odds of that happening? Fight scenes are a bit bland as well.

#2

The ending was so rushed. So many thing were left unfinished.

#3

Well let’s see. I just want a OP mc which can jump levels to kill others. Moreover, you’re right its. Bit bland as it doesn’t mention how is mc talent and it feels pretty normal boy with only a handsome face, rarely mentioned.