I was was proofread bodyguard of goddess chapter 3 but was rejected

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All I did is fix the the she/he mix up and fixed some sentence that didnt make sense. For example at the end it . He has the female character what her constellation she was. What she said was female seating. Wtf is that constellation. Lol it was suppose virgo.if anyone know tell me. Secondly why would the the character brag about how he a eight-feet. How does having long leg make sense. Just say he tall and that what i said. Lol can someone tell me way it was rejected?