Grammatical error & translation error

#1

Though there are a lot of grammatical error sometimes I got confused but this book I can’t avoid reading . I m addicted to this book . planning to complete this book . I would request u to pls translate properly it will be easier for us to read

#2

I read the novel on extnovel. Names are different but everything else is the same. Translation is a lot better and you fon’t have to wait for chapters to unlock.