Grammatical error needs to be corrected

#1

Please o,am I the only one noticing this errors

#2

No, there is too much grammar problems

#3

That what it is but when understand the novel you won’t notice it

#4

OMG it’s really bad. The way to address someone with Pronouns. So much confusion between ‘he’ ‘she’ ‘her’ ‘him’. The novel id really good but the minus point is too many Grammatical mistakes.
Kindly do proof reading before uploading.