Good story poor translation

#1

The plot is quite good but the translation is obviously MTL, and no one has edited it. I like the MC, she knows what she wants. As for the ML though… I really really really dislike him. He’s boderline cruel with the MC and no one seems to find it wrong. His comments are always hurtful, even if followed by his thoughts “I don’t want her to leave me, I love her, why can’t she trust me?” I pity the MC for being in love with him --’ Seeing as they are the OTP of this story, I hope he will get better

#2

To gets a free brick only for the first…

#3

Thank you so much for your coment!

#4

translation really off at different level