First Review

#1

Is this MTL? Cause some of the sentences don’t make sense, either way the story sometimes feels disjointed and there are some things that aren’t even properly explained like the cheat method he has. He said that some things differ from when he was dreaming like when they found out he could cultivate but they didn’t even address the reason why. Would only recommend as a popcorn novel to read while eating for the real good ones to update. 4/10 and even that is too generous.

#2

This machine translation but much better than those other one.

#3

Translation I mean. Lmao

#4

Pls check the translation well before you updated or upload the next chapters

#5

? I’m not the translator