Editor pleaseeee

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Did editor die? Im at chapter 7 and i already have a major headache trying to decipher all these sentences, is this site always like this or is my luck that bad, ive picked 3 books and all 3 of them had broken english, i cant even tell who’s thinking what or who is speaking which because they switch gender all of a sudden, is this BL? Or is MC a trap? What kind of a perversion is going on here?