Doing the review for free brick n the novel so far

#1

So continue on…After decided to split and 4 years later, out of the blue decided to go to hotel (ch145)!!! Eeeuuuuggghh writer seems to push the story a bit too much, a lot of loophole n doesn’t make sense. Sudden break up, sudden mistrust, sudden one night stand??? It’s unfortunate because the beginning was pretty well written