Creating conflict :failed

#1

The story is about half sibling falling in love but the author failed to narrate effectively the conflicting emotion of having physical relationship with half sibling instead it turn out that the ML seems to be forcing the FL and it’s like raping here,maybe it got lost in translation or maybe the author failed to tackle the emotional conflict involved in this incentous relationship but of course at the end they are not siblings.

#2

Thanks for comment. Wanna read this