Content review

**su_hani16** · May 25, 2020, 6:37am

The content is good, but grammar is poor

**eshahot1** · May 25, 2020, 6:38am

Yes exactly you are correct

**olgab** · May 25, 2020, 6:39am

Yes, indeed you have a point here!

**dong_326** · May 25, 2020, 6:45am

Sometimes makes the reader confused because of the grammar. Anyway it gets interesting as you read further.