Checking of errors

#1

I have been enjoying every chapter of the story, but there are a lot of grammatical errors. Example is “using of he for feminine”.

#2

you are right there are lots of grammatical error.Even simple he and she are mixed its hard to recognise.

#3

Yes there r grammatical mistakes but easily understood

#4

I agree, it used to bug me in the begin but as you get to know the characters it becomes easier

#5

Agreed a lot of grammatical mistakes

#6

Very nice story…Enjoying it♥️

#7

After reading this novel, my English is going to suffer a lot.