Chapters were carded certain parts

#1

I went to read chapter 1 again has parts that are missing, example after he wakes up he screams “water, water” after she hands a glass of water and speaks some words.

But after I reread, so many certain lines of the characters disappeared and even the title of the chapters.

Here is a part of the uncut original.

Chapter 1 - Return from Rebirth

Linzhou City, First People’s Hospital, Psychiatric Department.

On the sickbed, Jiang Tian’s body suddenly twitched, and he suddenly opened his eyes.

At this moment, his eyes were flickering, as if billions of stars were floating up and down, as if they were creating a universe.

“Water —!”

His head was in severe pain, and his entire body was burning. Smoke seemed to be coming out of his throat, and he could not help but moan lightly.

“Jiang Tian, you’re awake?” A shout of surprise came to his ears. It was soft and pleasant to listen to.

Immediately after, the ice cold container touched his lips, and cool water flowed down his throat, allowing Jiang Tian’s consciousness to clear up a little.

The moment he saw the girl that was being fed water, Jiang Tian couldn’t help but cry out in alarm: “Xue Qing, didn’t you already die?”

The girl in front of him had shoulder-length black hair and a pair of beautiful eyes as bright as gems. Her long eyelashes, plump lips, and delicate facial features made her look like a fairy from a painting.

He didn’t dare to believe it, and stretched out his hand to touch the girl’s hair as if to confirm his suspicions.

“Jiang Tian, what are you doing?”

Zhao Xue Qing subconsciously took a step back, and avoided Jiang Tian’s caress. Her clear eyes flashed with a trace of fear.

“Could it be that I’m back?”

Zhao Xue Qing’s beautiful face was extremely clear, and right before her eyes, Jiang Tian’s expression suddenly shook, and a wave had stirred in her heart.

Memories flashed through his mind like a slide.

As a disciple of the Jinling Jiang Family, Jiang Tian originally had an engagement with a rich girl from the Yanjing. However, the girl suddenly broke the engagement, making Jiang Tian the laughingstock of the Jinling.

In his fury, Jiang Tian had beaten up the young master who had come to end the engagement, causing a huge ruckus.

#2

How do you fix the chapters?

#3

Apply for proofreading assignment at the end of the chapter if available.

#4

also when proofreading chapter 1, i noticed the missing bits compared to the raw but i omitted them out as they seem mostly insignificant and minor, i think the biggest thing i left out was the part about Xue Qing being raped and committing suicide.

P.s only after i submitted the proofreading did i noticed the missing tittle, will double check on future edits.

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