The story is good, the author wastes often times with the viewpoints of other charachters, but Meng Yu is enjoyable in his adventures. Suddenly, when he got an immortal slave, become ruthless in his way of acting versus this slave. I don’t know if there is a method in evolving the Meng Yu characther, but often he is between the good way and the desplicable way in acting with women.
I read on books purchased on Amazon, so the storyline is a lot forward compare to where it’s published on Babelnovel site.
The translation is machine based, so sometimes mishaps appare between names or gender or repetitions of phrases occur.