A little conern

#1

My concers is that the traslation are a bit tricky… like she/he, him/her being scrambbled up… and also the names of secondary characters are the same… try to be a bit more constructive in using names… so that the readers can differentiate identities easier… thanks

#2

True… my concers are the same as well

#3

Yes the translation is bit tricky

#4

Ksjdjdjfjfjfjjfhshd jdjdhdhj hshdhhdh nsndn.

#5

True I sometimes can’t identify between male and female