Good novel but the translation needs a lot of improvement: inconsistent terms, redundant words / sentences, and 1 paragraph long chapters
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October 26, 2019
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A potential novel
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August 28, 2019
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The protagonist grew up step by step, down to earth
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August 28, 2019
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Come on! Stronger!
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August 28, 2019
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In the later stages of the internal conflict of the human race, when they saw that the protagonist had something good, they wanted to snatch it away
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May 14, 2019
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Do characters in novels always talk a lot of nonsense when they fight?!
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May 14, 2019
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The ending is very, very lousy. Be aware that next time, there will be very few people who will read your book like this
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May 14, 2019
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He was speechless. In the end, tens of thousands of Paragons had actually appeared. This was too ridiculous!
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May 14, 2019
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After giving Ye Wei so much, he didn't say anything about the ending. Was it really that good?
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May 14, 2019
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No, I, Ye Wei, cannot die like this
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May 14, 2019
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The novel is very well written
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May 14, 2019
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After reading a hundred chapters …
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May 14, 2019
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The protagonist is a Bane
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May 14, 2019
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Author's Review of Writing Water is considered to be very good
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May 14, 2019
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Inconsistency
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May 14, 2019
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Gong Qingxue loved Ye Wei so deeply
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May 14, 2019
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Why not call for help when you are in danger of being hunted
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May 14, 2019
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Just what happened to Ye Wei and Gong Qingxue in the end?!
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May 14, 2019
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The content is compact, the idea suits me
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May 14, 2019
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The protagonist is leveling up too fast
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May 14, 2019
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"The details are too little, and the descriptions of the various abilities are too little."
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May 14, 2019
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'Amazing! Can't I level up this fast?! '
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May 14, 2019
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"It's fine, but I'm not happy with the end."
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May 14, 2019
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Though the book be good
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May 14, 2019
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Translate after the page 234 is required
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April 24, 2019
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A pretty good novel! Very good writing! It was worth a look!
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April 24, 2019
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It's a bit of a routine, and I feel a bit uncomfortable, but I still don't have the whole thing
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April 24, 2019
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Self-made
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April 24, 2019
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Were they not prepared to write it?
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April 24, 2019
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I thought that the chapter about the Temporal Demon Spirit Book was over
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April 24, 2019
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